Hellobee Boards Topic: Do you like this invitation?

Hellobee Boards Topic: Do you like this invitation? https://boards.hellobee.com/ Pregnancy, Baby and Parenting blog, by Hellobee en Fri, 10 Jul 2026 06:09:29 +0000 Mrs. Pen on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360743 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 14:48:15 +0000 Mrs. Pen 360743@https://boards.hellobee.com/ @prettylizy: ours just built a brand new building and it's GORGEOUS!!! I love everything about it. @regberadaisy: yea like I said to alayaya - I still have more text to add so that will be fixed :) prettylizy on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360735 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 14:46:16 +0000 prettylizy 360735@https://boards.hellobee.com/ Love the second one, how adorable!!! And great party location too. I never though of the local nature centre for a birthday party, but I think it would be darling :) regberadaisy on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360727 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 14:42:14 +0000 regberadaisy 360727@https://boards.hellobee.com/ LOVE the second one! Agrees the text still needs to be centered and make sure spacing between are all the same. chopsuey on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360703 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 14:36:21 +0000 chopsuey 360703@https://boards.hellobee.com/ The invite with C's pic looks good! :) Mrs. Pen on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360700 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 14:35:41 +0000 Mrs. Pen 360700@https://boards.hellobee.com/ @Mrsbells: might be more so because it's on the computer screen. seeing it on paper would be less blinding lol Mrsbells on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360689 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 14:33:07 +0000 Mrsbells 360689@https://boards.hellobee.com/ I like the 2nd one but i think the blue at the top is a bit bright Baby Boy Mom on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360684 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 14:31:25 +0000 Baby Boy Mom 360684@https://boards.hellobee.com/ love the second one! Mrs. Pen on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360659 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 14:26:39 +0000 Mrs. Pen 360659@https://boards.hellobee.com/ @artbee: thank you :) heffalump on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360652 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 14:25:55 +0000 heffalump 360652@https://boards.hellobee.com/ Love the last one, very cute! alayaya on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360627 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 14:20:50 +0000 alayaya 360627@https://boards.hellobee.com/ @Coco Bee: Ah! I see. I thought that might have been the case. Never mind then! It looks fantastic, you have a good eye. Mrs. Pen on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360605 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 14:15:46 +0000 Mrs. Pen 360605@https://boards.hellobee.com/ @alayaya:& @Sammyfab: well there will be more text - I didn't add all the info for privacy reasons. @yoursilverlining: hahaha RIGHT. lol oops @Mrs. Tricycle: yeah I love that too! I'll have to take another photo of him in that hat when I'm closer to sending out the invites. @Thehistoryofus: if there is room after the rest of the party info, I can add it back in :) Amelieisme on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360588 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 14:11:37 +0000 Amelieisme 360588@https://boards.hellobee.com/ Love the second version! Love that the colors match his hat. I do agree with @Thehistoryofus: that it still needs to say "come celebrate" above the date and time. And be sure to change to 2013. Sammyfab on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360570 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 14:07:04 +0000 Sammyfab 360570@https://boards.hellobee.com/ I love the 2nd one with the photo! And I agree with pp that you might want to bring the text down a smudge (centre it all vertically then centre the party info text within its box). Great job! T.H.O.U. on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360495 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 13:42:33 +0000 T.H.O.U. 360495@https://boards.hellobee.com/ Like the second one much better. I still like the idea of "Come Celebrate with us" Mrs. Tricycle on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360492 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 13:41:52 +0000 Mrs. Tricycle 360492@https://boards.hellobee.com/ Second one looks great! And his hat in the photo works great with the other navy in the invite. alayaya on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360486 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 13:40:03 +0000 alayaya 360486@https://boards.hellobee.com/ @Coco Bee: Looks great and what a cute photo! I might still bring the main body of text down a smidge, but that's just me. It just seems like there is a lot of extra white space on the bottom and feels a bit cramped on the top by the banner. yoursilverlining on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360479 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 13:37:38 +0000 yoursilverlining 360479@https://boards.hellobee.com/ I like the second version much better - just make sure to change the year to 2013! :) Smurfette on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360474 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 13:35:44 +0000 Smurfette 360474@https://boards.hellobee.com/ @Coco Bee: Love that!! luckypenny on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360470 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 13:34:05 +0000 luckypenny 360470@https://boards.hellobee.com/ yes! LOVE it! Mrs. Pen on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360441 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 13:25:20 +0000 Mrs. Pen 360441@https://boards.hellobee.com/ ::UPDATE::: Okay what do you guys think of this one: [attach=1597/12/mcgoi8.504x360.sampleinvitewithphoto.jpg] alayaya on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360405 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 13:07:36 +0000 alayaya 360405@https://boards.hellobee.com/ @MrsCastro: I agree. Bring the text in the center down a little bit. I feel like it is a bit too close to the banner on the top. Cute design though! Mrs. Pen on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360286 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 12:21:52 +0000 Mrs. Pen 360286@https://boards.hellobee.com/ @regberadaisy: the borders aren't differing widths, maybe the chevron just gives that illusion? and no, it's definitely a different font :) I can play around with the fonts a little bit more too. @photojane: alright working on it right now :) regberadaisy on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360250 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 12:13:13 +0000 regberadaisy 360250@https://boards.hellobee.com/ @Coco Bee: is it the same font as everything else? I do like the other fonts! I think I know what's bothering me about the body text. Is it centered vertically between the borders? Also I noticed your borders are different widths. I think it works in your inspiration because of everything going on. But with yours with that much empty space, not as much. photojane on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360241 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 12:11:46 +0000 photojane 360241@https://boards.hellobee.com/ @Coco Bee: i like your fonts too. i definitely love that the inspiration has a picture -- i say, add it! :) Mrs. Pen on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360235 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 12:10:13 +0000 Mrs. Pen 360235@https://boards.hellobee.com/ @regberadaisy: haha really?! I love the fonts I used :) luckypenny on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360234 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 12:09:35 +0000 luckypenny 360234@https://boards.hellobee.com/ Yes - love it with the picture and bigger banner! You gotta show off that cute boy of yours :) regberadaisy on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360230 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 12:08:30 +0000 regberadaisy 360230@https://boards.hellobee.com/ Not a fan of the "is turning" font. I think the body text needs to be centered between the ip of the bottom border and bottom of the Jacobi piece. Centered on the card makes it look off. Mrs. Pen on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360185 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 11:55:56 +0000 Mrs. Pen 360185@https://boards.hellobee.com/ @zippylef: haha it's the day after Cobi's birthday ;) @Cole: bahaha no I change it for privacy lol it's not my phone # either ;) @MrsCastro: totally made sense. I will try that. okay... I'll try a picture too. I figured that was something I couldn't really add until closer to when we send them out. but I might add one to see how it looks. This was my inspiration, and it has a cute photo: [attach=1597/12/mcgkd8.554x469.284430532686994525_XGnCH772_c.jpg] T.H.O.U. on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360171 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 11:52:49 +0000 T.H.O.U. 360171@https://boards.hellobee.com/ I would make the navy banner larger since that is the focus. I would move the "come celebrate" text to the bottom half of the card. Personally, I would also look at another font for "Come Celebrate" so that the c's can be capitalized. loveisstrange on "Do you like this invitation?" https://boards.hellobee.com/topic/do-you-like-this-invitation#post-360144 Thu, 25 Oct 2012 11:42:09 +0000 loveisstrange 360144@https://boards.hellobee.com/ Cute! I do agree with making the banner larger and maybe adding a small picture of some sort to fill in the blank space. It just feels a little bare right now. That's my birthday, btw. :)